Post by halinder on May 29, 2020 23:47:28 GMT -5
outline
- talk about the capital, Harikagece, and its meaning (great night, reference to patterns on planet). basically a hook for showing how fuckin' neat this place is while also reminding people it's dangerous
- outright tell people's it's dangerous and that they need to take a few steps first
- go through process of arriving, working with the MFZ and its big fucking warfortresses to abide by traffic and "park" in areas of orbit, mention not to fuck with the copious amount of orbital fortresses in the planet's rings, TELL PEOPLE NOT TO PARK ANYWHERE NEAR THE RINGS, STAY IN INNER ORBIT YOU HEATHENS.
- go over things you don't do, like using ship equipment on the surface. seriously, please don't go using your big ol' scanners to sweep us, we can do without electromagnetic interference and also there are cybersecurity concerns. go over fines (no prices needed, just let people know fines exist)
- go over procedure for entering the planet itself. people are taken by shuttle to a complex in inner orbit, literally a big ol' airport-like terminal where shuttles go to and from the surface. khanate doesn't have fancy space elevators, just big engines. include info about the information kiosks, how to find your shuttle, etc. mention "basic phrase translations" on the back of the primer, never define the actual translations.
- second shuttle brings people to area of the planet. area may be an environmental dome, a town in the open, etc. tell people that without special permissions, the dark side of the planet is absolutely off-limits and that if they do have special permissions, they must be aware that travel in the area will nevertheless be slow due to traffic being dedicated to essential supply deliveries.
- mention danger of literal terrorists, also mention the terrorists are probably going to die horribly if they try to kill you.
- mention info kiosks have details on how to get into contact with local militia according to the area you intend to go to, requiring you to select the place you plan to go on the kiosk. flavor text still.
- tell everyone to have a wonderful time, enjoy Khanate hospitality, and learn about the culture.
- talk about the capital, Harikagece, and its meaning (great night, reference to patterns on planet). basically a hook for showing how fuckin' neat this place is while also reminding people it's dangerous
- outright tell people's it's dangerous and that they need to take a few steps first
- go through process of arriving, working with the MFZ and its big fucking warfortresses to abide by traffic and "park" in areas of orbit, mention not to fuck with the copious amount of orbital fortresses in the planet's rings, TELL PEOPLE NOT TO PARK ANYWHERE NEAR THE RINGS, STAY IN INNER ORBIT YOU HEATHENS.
- go over things you don't do, like using ship equipment on the surface. seriously, please don't go using your big ol' scanners to sweep us, we can do without electromagnetic interference and also there are cybersecurity concerns. go over fines (no prices needed, just let people know fines exist)
- go over procedure for entering the planet itself. people are taken by shuttle to a complex in inner orbit, literally a big ol' airport-like terminal where shuttles go to and from the surface. khanate doesn't have fancy space elevators, just big engines. include info about the information kiosks, how to find your shuttle, etc. mention "basic phrase translations" on the back of the primer, never define the actual translations.
- second shuttle brings people to area of the planet. area may be an environmental dome, a town in the open, etc. tell people that without special permissions, the dark side of the planet is absolutely off-limits and that if they do have special permissions, they must be aware that travel in the area will nevertheless be slow due to traffic being dedicated to essential supply deliveries.
- mention danger of literal terrorists, also mention the terrorists are probably going to die horribly if they try to kill you.
- mention info kiosks have details on how to get into contact with local militia according to the area you intend to go to, requiring you to select the place you plan to go on the kiosk. flavor text still.
- tell everyone to have a wonderful time, enjoy Khanate hospitality, and learn about the culture.